I admit that I am totally sick of WIPs (my own included thank you /wry chuckle), so I waited until this story was completely posted before even looking at it... and then promptly read the whole thing in one sitting.
I *loved* this! Very well crafted -- Mason was really beginning to drive me nuts and all I could see was Don losing it and just... going postal on him. Characters were very canon; intense and wonderfully detailed. Loved the action and I could really see Mason's 'research' of such movies like "Speed" (which is a favorite of mine). Loved the climax to the whole thing, pulling everything together.
Really, truly well done :) Thanks so much for sharing :)
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Date: 30 Aug 2010 17:53 (UTC)I *loved* this! Very well crafted -- Mason was really beginning to drive me nuts and all I could see was Don losing it and just... going postal on him. Characters were very canon; intense and wonderfully detailed. Loved the action and I could really see Mason's 'research' of such movies like "Speed" (which is a favorite of mine). Loved the climax to the whole thing, pulling everything together.
Really, truly well done :) Thanks so much for sharing :)