Sorry, I'm a little late to the party here, but I just had to tell you how much I loved this first chapter. I could point out that I really like the idea of the double set-up meeting in the beginning. I could list all the great lines (Dean's especially). I could rave about the image of Don, on his knees in front of an open grave, with Dean holding a gun to the back of his head (OMG). But, really, just Dean and Don together made the story. They always do. Great characters, great writing.
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Date: 28 Mar 2012 01:39 (UTC)But, Dean wouldn't really ... would he?